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Sophia

Merritt

Writing Center

     The Writing Center was actually very helpful with revisions on my paper. When I went we worked on sentence fluency for the most part. We figured out why my paper was not as clear as I wanted to be. When reading my paper aloud I was able to catch a lot of my mistakes myself. The most helpful part was when i was given a checklist of what I need to do to my paper before I turn it in.
       I made progress by start embedding my quotes and analyzing them more thoroughly.  Another thing I made progress on is making my introduction more clear. I thought it would be more difficult to write any better but, it turned out I had a lot of mistakes made and I was able to fix them. This is why the writing center was so helpful.

What if all currency was replaced with cookies.

     Even though having all currency replaced with cookies sound awesome it is not the best idea. The main reason is because if I have a cookie is just sitting there I am going to eat it. The next reason is because All the "money" or "cookies" will go to the cookie companies. So if you buy all the cookies from the store to bake, the money or the cookies will go back to the company you just brought them from.

    Then after that happens that would be the richest company to work in. Then the cookie companies would probably try to to start selling cookies already baked. Then when you buy them from the store they will be less valuable. Then the cookie companies will be sued. So many problems will occur if this happens.

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       Why is music so essential for us as humans, to listen too. One thing is that it calms our nerves. I feel as if music is the way people express themselves knowing that other people feel the same way. Music is just a terrific thing to embark upon. Music can be happy, sad, "lit", or just what goes on in everyday life.
       Without music life would be boring and hard to endure. Another reason why is because it stimulates our mind. Music puts a smile on everyones face. The only way you can be sad listening to a song is because your trapped in your feelings and only you can choose to be in that place listening to sad music. There is a song for every type of emotion. That is why music is an art.

My Literary Analysis

       My literary analysis was a breeze until it came down to the conclusion paragraph.  The conclusion paragraph is the most difficult because of trying to bring your paper to a close. The resources that have helped me the most are the papers of what you should not do. Looking at that narrows down and helps me to find what I need in my conclusion.
       Although the body of your paper when writing goes by pretty smooth. Writing the outline really help shape my paper to make it better. I have learned that you should not procrastinate on a paper. Everyday put a little work into it.  Do Repeat the same thing over and over again because, it will hurt you.