The Writing Center was actually very helpful with revisions on my paper. When I went we worked on sentence fluency for the most part. We figured out why my paper was not as clear as I wanted to be. When reading my paper aloud I was able to catch a lot of my mistakes myself. The most helpful part was when i was given a checklist of what I need to do to my paper before I turn it in.
I made progress by start embedding my quotes and analyzing them more thoroughly. Another thing I made progress on is making my introduction more clear. I thought it would be more difficult to write any better but, it turned out I had a lot of mistakes made and I was able to fix them. This is why the writing center was so helpful.
I like how you explained how the writing center was helpful in great detail. The writing center also helped me a lot. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that the writing center was very helpful. I got a lot of good tips from them.
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